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Chances |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
Chances A part of me fears the rejection of your love As does pureness inflict the lonely dove; Like flocks of birds over the ocean peacefully flown So is the warmth and solitude we all have sewn, From the comfort of memories and silent time Forever and the last sunset sublime. Is your heart willing to take this chance, At the edge of eternity so our souls can dance? And we will forever thank the roses of triumph Because love and gardens bloom gloriously from heavens trump; But first you must allow your heart a pause To wipe away pain from body and cause So that you can clearly see in front of you A man who will always love you for you. Marcel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely written and much enjoyed Marcel. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Excellent!! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Risking our heart is the chance we take. Finding that special someone who will always love us for who we are, is loves greatest reward!! Enjoyed your poem so very much, marcel~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Well done Keith! So very good to read you again. There is risk in this feast you write of... But that's the sweetest victory...when intimacy flows past the physical plane and embraces us wholely and fully. Awesome. TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Much enjoyed this! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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