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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
So came she then To strip the leaving from my limbs And write upon the loam where roots reside Letters still I can not read The sky is blue yet she hides beyond the rise Of flat plain before the thigh of land She waits to rage again To drench this my land in pyrotechnic blends That shear the sky in broken lines To twist the wind Bring from dreams my strewn clothes That I stand not naked flesh against the storm She laughs easily and knows Conquered fools will stick rods in sand To melt what lies within the boundaries Of worlds stilled into a paragraph Semaphored of rain or rage I grow old But weak eyes can see past the veil Of slumbered minds and pale lost moon To where it all began A story then to be shorn of cotton clouds Forming there along the rhyme of fronts within Sleeping soul She draws me still and in To wish for more of drenching days Spent in laze of wet smells wrapped on skin While rumbling low and deep begins The thunder of her soul Turning loose the reign of sky Letting go along the sigh of scattered clouds When storms subside I look for you Each time it rains |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"To wish for more of drenching days Spent in laze of wet smells wrapped on skin While rumbling low and deep begins The thunder of her soul Turning loose the reign of sky Letting go along the sigh of scattered clouds When storms subside I look for you Each time it rains" God mister....this is complete perfection...deep, deep this goes...and it's mine to keep  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"She draws me still and in To wish for more of drenching days Spent in laze of wet smells wrapped on skin While rumbling low and deep begins The thunder of her soul Turning loose the reign of sky Letting go along the sigh of scattered clouds When storms subside I look for you Each time it rains" Damn!...your words are magic Captain. Thank you Sir for this summer keeper. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
again, a very appropriate read for me today. When the sun shines as it did today, I feel like it is mocking me. I believe it's impossible for you to write a bad poem Cap. I need a book of you. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I sent my letters hidden in the gray foam of skies in tears and then poured forth my melancholy mood ~ my berating temperament only sounded thunderous, for the moment... but then I hailed repent scattering my bones, broken... knowing, not knowing, who was listening... Oh, God, I'm glad it was you. ~*~ You do know how to inspire. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Makes me sad and reflect on what used to be. You have such a gift and write with such pure emotion, Cpat. I was watching the Eagles in concert, (on TV) in Melbourne Australia last night. I had to get a grip when they started playing "Desperado" Desperado, why don’t you come to your senses? You been out ridin’ fences for so long now Oh, you’re a hard one I know that you got your reasons It may be rainin’, but there’s a rainbow above you I know I'm rambling, but it's a nice thought to go with your poem. Well done Sir, as always~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron.....loved your poem! Buildings all nudge and stucco bright Beware the flight of wind Come night descending wings A kite without tether Tangles in the wires of my road And brings the lightening To my soul’s abode Reaching for my sagacity Inborn I am my own storm |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
***love the feel of rain...and words...on the skin*** outstanding scribe, Chief~ **baby **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
the flow of this just swallowed me whole  wonderful |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
What Karen said... on rainy days I actually feel some sort of relief as if I can put down the mask. even the cold rain feels good.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
So came she then To strip the leaving from my limbs And write upon the loam where roots reside Letters still I can not read this alone...touches M |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Love the images created in this write Ron. believe in what your heart feels... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
much enjoyed |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I grow old But weak eyes can see past the veil Of slumbered minds and pale lost moon To where it all began Ah, my friend... this is superb!!! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
She can be found in the soft sweet smell of Earth. The soil is moist and grainy, almost as sand slipping through an hourglass. The days of time of days . . . Kneel down in the dirt, man. Push your fingers deep into the heart of her. Bring forth her essence and lie your body, prone upon her own allowing the rainfall to kiss you clean. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
if one studied each and ever word and image, one could still not glean and take the talent with which you write, for every poem is uniquely YOU... beautiful work my friend |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well springs of images, self sacrifice for the well being of nature, you tell the world a story....an amazing view, thank you |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
When storms subside I look for you Each time it rains ~~ I know this search.....  I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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