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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-06-02 12:39 PM


About Me About You


When you smile
my world becomes
a brighter place.

When you laugh
I laugh with you,
you know how to
put a smile upon
my face.

When you're mad at me
I feel like somehow
I have failed.

When you tell me
that you feel
comfortable
in my presence
I know that all
is going well.

When you kiss me
I feel my dreams
are coming true.

When you lay in my arms
I know everything
I need to know
about me, about you.


JamesLee
June01
2005

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with you
1 posted 2005-06-02 12:46 PM


wonderful James
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2 posted 2005-06-02 11:57 AM


beautiful

I love those times when everything is known

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2005-06-03 02:26 AM


Thank you Sea and passing shadows for the nice responses....James
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4 posted 2005-06-04 03:54 PM


This was very well crafted! I like it!
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