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0 posted 2005-06-01 01:47 PM



"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

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1 posted 2005-06-01 05:24 PM


beautifully done
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2 posted 2005-06-01 05:34 PM


Yes, decidedly lovely.
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3 posted 2005-06-01 05:34 PM


I like the images in this.  And the way you write it over the picture, so that the words complement the picture and the picture defines the words.  Well Done.

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4 posted 2005-06-02 10:41 AM


thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment.

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

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5 posted 2005-06-17 09:11 AM


A challenge from Ed -- spend a moment today, thinking about how we should treat a good person who is one of PiP's finest poets....if not this one, then one of your choice....it seems we need to.
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