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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2005-05-31 12:50 PM



How good it was . . .
To taste the fruit . . .
From her summer arbor

Peach fragrance—
Through an opened window—
Sunlight on the bedroom wall

© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2005-05-31 01:27 PM


South Bend, Indiana.

I grew up just a hop, skip and a jump from there.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-05-31 02:04 PM


Beautiful John!!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2005-05-31 02:23 PM



I don't think this is a statement of place ~
but more of a state of time,
and her place...

*smile*

Thank you, John.

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-05-31 02:57 PM


agreeing here with kari, although it could be applied to a favorite Island which I've visited....

Great vision

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
5 posted 2007-04-30 03:09 PM


what a cheerful heart!
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