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jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

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0 posted 2005-05-31 10:31 AM

This union she perceived
to be unbearable but yet, year after year remained
thus weighted.

She tried to weep it under the rug but
the lump was so ludicrous she could not
lie her way around it.

She dropped her anguish
from on high
to drown it in her deepening tears
but too late remembered
it was tied ring finger round.

When the last air bubble rose out of sight
she finally embraced acquiesce…
and yes, I know, befriending
at this point seems barely logical, but then
who ever said that she was
thinking clearly.

When the tears receded she looked up;
the trees framed in blue waved welcome and so
being a writer of words she did the next logical thing-
she picked up a pen and wrote
a poem about it.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-05-31 10:35 AM

Blessed be the inventors
of paper
and pencil.

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

2 posted 2005-05-31 10:38 AM

A profoundly well crafted write.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-05-31 10:43 AM

"When the tears receded she looked up;
the trees framed in blue waved welcome and so
being a writer of words she did the next logical thing-
she picked up a pen and wrote
a poem about it."

Excellent write JB!!
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

4 posted 2005-05-31 11:10 AM

thank you all...sigh...guess giving up is not as bad as I made it out to be *s*

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

5 posted 2005-05-31 03:21 PM

And thank goodness she does... for her words never fail to touch our hearts. *S*

adagio
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since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

6 posted 2005-05-31 03:32 PM

Very well done,
don't think you could improve
on this one!
a keeper.

passing shadows
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displaced

7 posted 2005-05-31 04:14 PM

beautiful write

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

8 posted 2005-05-31 08:18 PM

"She tried to weep it under the rug but
the lump was so ludicrous she could not
lie her way around it."

That is always a problem.

Very well done.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

9 posted 2005-05-31 08:22 PM

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