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Ahab |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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Bravo, my second time out and I only managed to lose one five dollar lure. There was a fish, I think a carp. I could have taken five steps, reached down with my hand and picked him up. Instead I cast past him, around him, and in front of his nose. I almost caught the sluggard by snagging his tail. Then Zen like I slowly began to become the fish. I could feel the gills I could feel his thought: “Boy, I’m really hungry , I could eat anything now , yes, anything, anything, however old the smell anything at all, but never whatever the Hell is that !” [This message has been edited by Huan Yi (05-30-2005 09:03 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love a fish story, John, and this made me smile especially since I love the "think like a fish" line of reasoning. But unfortunately for me, lines of reasoning snap under the weight of the big reds. grin? Loved this... |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
nice. |
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