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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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There is no Certainty. . . That as I dive It isn't to some death I stoop my being toward oblivion Each time I fold my wings The surface planes, Appearing calm,. . . Assure no future days Yet, if I lived On fear alone How Would I ever fly |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
If we lived on fear, not only wouldn't we fly .... we probably would not even take another step! Good write! Chris  Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Very good, John... Language, brevity, and thought... -----------ice ><> |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Haun Yi...Enjoyed the reality of your words. Thanks for sharing...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
How indeed.... or how do anything but fly, until flying ran out... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Amen... To give in to fear is to give up... this is excellent! |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful! |
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