Open Poetry #35 |
sunday morning with my baby girl |
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
morning breeze kisses whisper their sweet caresses ‘cross bare legs dangling along the edge of the deck the early morning sun, being courted by a blue, blue sky, beams down her warm blush pleasure to envelop my baby girl and I the robins and larks, how they dance hopping about the green, green grass the bumble bees, they bumble as they tumble through the air my baby girl chatters with the happies just hangin’ with her mommy here and I think I taste a slice of Heaven with the magic cast by this spell for the sweet, sweet of summer has found us with her simplicity and savory hues weaving about us her capture of wonder in this lazy daisy day spill s.a.t. If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A beautiful sharing dear Susan of your sweet Summer Sunday morning. Reading was like being there and seeing the picture and taking part in it. Indeed these are moments to be immortalized. Love and Joy. Margherita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful write Susan.. Your imagery took me there as I watched you and your daughter. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A serenely sweet summer day to be savored ~ and remembered ~ and treasured... Sparkles, you shine with this one. I do believe your baby is fortunate to have a mother such as you! Love & Summer Light, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there is no greater thing than mother and daughter time |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
thank you, dear ladies - for your warm and for sharing my moment of sunshine - may sunshine bless you all and your loved ones too - hugs - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is such a touching write, Susan~ You captured the magic and simplicity, so beautifully~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You captured a moment in time that can never be re-created, and you did it with love, grace, such sweetness and, simplicity. Loved this poem Susan, and printed it for my "Keeper Book." A lovely thing to read this morning. Carpe'Diem - but I see you do. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Bluesy- thank you my friend Mysteria - you bless me, I am so pleased you wished to add this to your colleciton Hugs to you both - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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