»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #35
»
untitled
| Open Poetry #35 |
|
untitled |
|
|
Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
When was it that I thought we were o.k. You would change and take our marriage vows serious. You promised me to be faithful and love and that you needed me by your side. Promised what? not to change. not to take care of this family. promised to keep her on the side just in case things didn't work out. Needed me how? needed me when she didn't want you anymore. needed a place to stay when no one else would take you in because you screwed them. needed someone to mooch off of. to work AND take care of you while you sit on your a**. They all knew it wouldnt last.... From the false start to the declining down the mountain finish. Sad part of this is they DID warn me and all I did was push them away to prove it would work.....it didn't. |
||
| © Copyright 2005 Sami - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The biggest deception that we ever face in life, is the one we sell ourselves kiddo. The channeling of such emotion in your poetry is a healthy outlet, and you write it with clarity and heart. Hang in there. TD |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
we always question and second guess and blame ourselves til we look back as see it was only a light that burned out and needed to be changed enjoy reading you cloudy |
||
|
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Wishing you lots of sunshine to push those clouds away.... poetry helps get it out...it helps to release the anger, and helps us to see ourselves, our lives more clearly. gives us perspective! Love and Hugs ~Arh  We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
