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cinnamongirl
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since 2003-02-02
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0 posted 2005-05-27 04:12 PM


I love it
when you're
like this.
Your fingers
reach
the deepest creases
of my longing,
lingering
soul
and smooth
and soften them
as silken water
allowing
the air and light
to illuminate
and fill the whole of
me and
I am exquisitely

alive, alive..

as though I am
newborn,
never knowing,
never seeing
before...
my mind drinking it
all in within a
sudden

rush rush


of the
tidal wave
that is my
first true breath,
savoring
the sweetness
lining the length
and width
and depth of
all I am
and will be...
who I have always
been.
I love it
when you're
like
this...
the passion rising
heated
to your
gentle face,
floating buoyant
upon the surface
from the
ecstasy
of its
release
and raining
upward
to join
caress
and taste my lips
as a long-lost
lover,
your breath
seeking,
finding its way
beneath
my thoughts
and weaving
within,
flooding,
warming
my cinnamon
skin and
life in me
begins again...


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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2005-05-27 06:11 PM


beautiful
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2005-06-02 12:47 PM


Nice...James
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3 posted 2005-06-02 03:42 PM


Moca~
This is sentuality at it's loveliest~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-06-02 03:50 PM


beautiful!
Enchantress
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5 posted 2005-06-02 03:57 PM


Absolutely beautiful Moca!!
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 2005-06-06 03:55 PM


Beautiful and sensual... I like! *S*
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displaced
7 posted 2005-06-06 05:41 PM


a smooth flow down the page...
lovely write

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2005-06-06 06:06 PM


Now I know why I have not seen you for awhile! You've been busy getting loved up ~ and right well at that!

Whew! You conveyed those feelings VERY well!

I am happy for you!


EA

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