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Love So Strong
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Love So Strong |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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As the tree, unable to bend, through the storms, of the wind, Through hurtful pain, beyond devastation, Love, reborn, rejuvenation, Being tortured, through the soul, Stripped clean, all emotions let go, Forgiveness deep, forever resides, throughout loves deep, stormy tides, Iron, steel, loves grip has hold, heavier weight, for my heart to hold, Struggles, fightings, death and more, through it all, a strong love, conquers hearts at war, Little things, big things, souls pain, a travisity, above it all, through it all, A love so strong, shows humble humility, For true love, is not always wine, dine, romance and dance, poem and Rhyme, flowers and fragrance, hypnotized by heart chimes, A strong love,goes stronger, deeper, than any other, More than a friend or a lover, A strong love brings you soup, when your sick in bed, massages your feet from work, keeps your body and heart fed, A strong love, cries with you, Forgives all your mistakes, Loves you for your faults, thick and thin, whatever it takes, To move and bend, but to remain, not fall, A love so strong, a tree in the forest. standing tall, A love so strong, comforts you in pain, encourages you, brings sunshine for your rain, A love so strong, remains faithful under pressure, a golden heart, of pure love, devotion to treasure, A love so strong, defies death and all odds, destroys bitterness and hate, A love so strong, binds, does not separate, unites hearts of love, friends and families, nations and states, countrys of war, it brings peace, A LOVE SO STRONG, DENIES SELF ABOVE ALL, does not boast, remains so small, A strong love, puts others first,self last, Happiness flows from, letting go of the past, Love is an offer, a self sacrifice, a cleanseing souls release, A love so strong, is humble, not jealous or boastful, nor full of pride, Tells the truth, does not hide, Never deceives by lie, For my heart contains a love so strong, as spoken above, One that evil cannot defeat, Not half but whole, not just through good, but bad, through happy and sad, A love so strong, to make another soul complete, through right and wrong, grow together, Through lifes dance, singing lifes songs, throughout changing seasons, sustaining hot/cold weather, This is a love so strong, Where in my heart, You will belong, Forever...... "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Such passion..it made the screen drip and melt as i read it...a brilliant poem... Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is a brilliant poem! And I like the word crafting. |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Yes, Very beautiful write. I am so happy you have found that strong love. Kristabell |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Excellent!! |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Beautiful and passionate. Love so strong could only be found...in your heart. CG |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
wow!! powerful, yet spoken with heart and soul  lovingly  My spirit will rise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic...enjoyed your thoughts on love....James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
ARH, this is one of your best yet! Very, very much enjoyed! *hugs*....jo |
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