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ice
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0 posted 2005-05-25 08:29 AM

Cat-bird song descends,
Falling sweet
Ear-fruit, dropped
From treetop height,
That hits the ground
Without a bruise.

The gray-bird lifts
And for a while
It cedes its choral,
As the evening darkness creeps
And curtain/closes down
His day-lit concert.

In the June,
That has become;

The gay bird
Rests its voice,
A while, and sleeps

As flying mammals
Dart in circles,
Dark wings flapping
Squeaking soft
In (bushmen) clicks,
Just above park benches

Where new lovers sit
And dove-cue-cuddle,
In the dim-light-glow
Of a (finally its)
Summer, moon.

© Copyright 2005 ford hume - All Rights Reserved

passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-05-25 08:31 AM

wonderful!

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-05-25 08:34 AM

well, after reading this, not only am I proud to be a Pennsylvanian, but also, honored to be here, in PIP, tremendous write...all you poets are really something

Loved this...thank you for sharing

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-05-25 09:40 AM

Perfect title to a beautiful poem, Ford.
Such a calming sensation emoting from it.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2005-05-25 09:42 AM

ice
A pleasant read, enjoyed.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

5 posted 2005-05-25 11:47 AM

I thoroughly enjoyed this May to June, Nature Concerto!

Springtime hugs,
EA

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-05-25 03:47 PM

A beautiful write Ford!!
Very much enjoyed..such a calming feeling.
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
-Danny Kaye

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2005-05-26 08:31 AM

Ford this filled me with such a calming sense of peace. A lovely read for my morning, very well written sir. Brava.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

froggy
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Michigan

8 posted 2005-05-29 06:34 PM

Another beautiful read.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

iliana
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USA

9 posted 2005-05-31 12:04 PM

Ford, I see and hear it all. Much enjoyed.

....jo

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10 posted 2005-05-31 12:47 PM

Never dissapointed when I read you Ice -
this was beautiful

Tima

inkedgoddess
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11 posted 2005-06-01 08:08 AM

a chorus gathers
once again
it's JUNE !!!!

Marge Tindal

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12 posted 2005-06-01 01:03 PM

Ford~
This penning is filled with images of beauty~

'dove-cue-cuddle'

*soft smile*
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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