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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-05-25 06:59 AM

black woman sensual
suggesting the way away
and into your other secrets

when the rains bathe you
and you are nude promises
languid in length

you are the lovley one

you offer me the abrasion
of your willing gravel
and the glue down of your ebony

there between the breasts
of el nowhere towns
jutting their concrete d'cups

to distract some highwayman

into the nuzzle of their alley
for a frolic with the dumpster sounds
when the orange shirt men

push them in rows
to feed their metal pigs
the plastic gluttony of lonely

you are the lovely 1 then

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dark (scribblenote: hiway 1 south this am)

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-05-25 08:50 AM

How did I miss this lovely and you...amazingly beautiful...that woman highway, isn't she...and your voice of patience and reason...which sees so much in nature's brilliant blessings.

Thank you for sharing

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-05-25 08:55 AM

push them in rows
to feed their metal pigs
the plastic gluttony of lonely

you are the lovely 1 then

whew, had to stop back for another read
this aches...but bittersweetly embraces
know the feelings you speak of my friend, amazingly well done!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2005-05-25 09:10 AM

very cool write D

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2005-05-25 09:21 AM

I have found myself
listening to a station
on the 'net
FM 98, 99,
the highwaystations
spreading news from Vegas
to Barstow, Lompoc to LA,
so with yesterday sounds
and highwayman poems

I am home again.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2005-05-25 10:01 AM

enjoyed your view - D

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-05-25 11:33 AM

interesting

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

7 posted 2005-05-25 11:56 AM

Excellent!

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