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Open Poetry #35

Terminations

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-02-23 01:36 AM

It's night.
There's a part
of the line
that is caving in,
falling upon
familiar names.

After, not even
a simple stone
will mark the words
as once were used.

I talk among those dying eyes
condemned by far off strategies.

Share a joke
with lives to end

beneath the light

of a single flare.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2005-02-23 01:33 PM

It always amazes me when I find so few responses on your works... This is superb!

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2005-06-21 04:18 AM

And it amazes me how, even in the middle of the night, in a mood from hell, I can open a poem of yours and be moved almost to tears.

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

3 posted 2005-06-21 10:21 AM

RL,

Thanks,

Look on the bright side;
in this case, there’s at least a chance
General Dennis may be going to jail.

Thanks again.

John

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