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Rewind Of Remind - May 24, 1957
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Rewind Of Remind - May 24, 1957 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Rewind Of Remind May 1957 ~*Marge Tindal*~ O ~ o ~ O' Twist of fate that brought me here one precious moment too late Parting farewell from this heart explosive remnant of swift depart Salvaged watch from rubbled heap rusts forever in hour of your sleep the hands of time no more do turn across the life of this daughter Daddy I hold each tick of you as if there should be more Rewind Of Remind ~*~ *Memories of my father remind me of his pocketwatch the firefighters found and returned to us after the explosion that took his life The hands forever silenced at the precise heartbreak of time* Mitchell C. Cowart July 1,1917 - May 24,1957 ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is stunning, my friend... My heart holds you today as you remember... may there be many smiles in those memories as well as the inevitable tears. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Beautiful Marge. Just last night I dreamed of my father. Thank you for such a lovely tribute hon. HUGS |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Incredible, dear Marge, you have done this so masterfully ... exceptional in presentation and words. This remembrance is lived by your heart so deeply. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A wonderful tribute Marge...well done! heart hugs~Nancy Life is one great big canvas; |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
You have a talent for wrapping so much into a magnificent presentation of few word, Marge. I really appreciate that. Thanks for sharing. God bless! Rae |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
A wonderful tribute, Marge, and beautiful presentation. May your memories be of comfort to you at this time. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Well done Marge. Good sentiments and great style. martyjo |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
That must have been a most tragic moment for you and all of your family...I know the feel of losing a parent early in life...and I want you to have this big hug... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is such a tender, heart-felt write, Marge. Wishing you a peaceful heart, Corinne |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely Marge. Hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
 Time does not heal all wounds, but it does wound all heels. This resonated with me, and for a moment I heard the ticking clearly. Well done. never try to teach a pig to sing |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis I understand and offer my loving hug. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Tender writing of a loved one...James |
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Aleta Member
since 2005-04-17
Posts 102Louisiana |
The shape, the words, the meaning…… carry my tears… |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh mama Marge...this touches *thinking of you in prayer* |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: However we lose them, they leave a big empty spot behind! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you ALL so kindly~ Sometimes it seems like a forever ago ... and sometimes it seems like yesterday~ The memories of that day often come flashing back with a clarity that makes it difficult to remember ....~ So sadly I think of the grandchildren my dad missed knowing and the great grandchildren who will only know him through my memories~ In the tender teen years I learned that life is held in such a fragility of time ... never knowing when one that we love will be taken ...  Fortunately for me, my father was almost as good a 'packrat' as I am ... I was blessed with a cedar chest of treasures that I can 'touch' in my remembers~  *Huglets* to each of you for the blessing of your friendship~ ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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