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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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I have found most blessings can be avoided, if destiny overlooks them. Situations arise like an insatiable fog, where passing through them is the only way to put them behind us. Mistakes are when your eyes shift in my direction, and all I feel is guilt, I'd almost forgotten what blame feels like. I am a well conditioned excuse, or an unwanted obligation, I am not human. Anger is heat and sweltering discomfort that resembles a pitiful embrace, that without reason, defies all logic. This is not a dream, in my most insane moments I am disgusted by my honesty, I wish this away, so that I might feel.... Joy is like my backseat in the dark watching stars melt in the sky.. Tracing the wind with my fingertips, and all I can think about is how you made me feel. But I am so soon reminded of how solitary and involuntary laughter can be, so we are stuck...in such lonesome despair... ..it's a prison that watches us descend below and beyond all sanity, leaving us with cryptic messages to decode..and hoping in silence that we crack like useless mirrors.. Although, it is all really a reflection of what it feels like to die. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I think everything is that, megs. Death and regeneration. We only grapple like jugglers, to explain the differences, we keep the answers in the air. Hugsssssssssss |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
'where passing through them is the only way to put them behind us." and sometimes that is what we need to do...noting of course how we do it and why.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Situations arise like an insatiable fog, where passing through them is the only way to put them behind us." this is awesome  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Another excellent write from your gifted pen Meghan. hugs~Nancy Life is one great big canvas; |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Excellent poem. It left me sad, and tired of what happens between people. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
leaving us with cryptic messages to decode..and hoping in silence that we crack like useless mirrors *************************************** like a bowl of alphabet soup, sometimes you have to find your own words yes, pain like this makes dying a breeze wisdom on your blue pages |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
seriously outstanding. brilliant and painful and insightful. raw, yet eloquent... my kind of poetry. we all got somethin' to atone for... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
exactly! well done! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Megs, your writing is amazingly powerful and brutely honest...and yet, like anyone who self examines, tends to over self persecute...you made a mistake, and yet, know the pain of this you speak of...it is when we realize, the hurt we've caused others, and it is then, I think God smiles down on us the most, for realizing our injury to others...and trying to better those moments, soften the blows, as we sometimes hurt so badly Hugs hun |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
and why I feel so... similar. I guess something made me to drop by PiP today |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I often wondered why some bad parts of life hurt so much, and no answers could I find, until I realized how wonderful the "good" feels when it comes Fantastic writing but a sad one. ~* C'est la vie *~ |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Kaoru, Very deep ,very profound. enjoyed very much. adagio |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
where passing through them is the only way to put them behind us. "stepping through the shadow, coming out the other side..stepping through the shadow 46 & 2 just ahead of me" life is nothing but tests, and i'm failing miserably..but "i must keep reminding myself of this..." |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"But I am so soon reminded of how solitary and involuntary laughter can be, so we are stuck...in such lonesome despair..." That just spoke to me. Thank you for making me think Tima |
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