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Ericc
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0 posted 2005-05-23 07:35 PM



Not believing in this
lie of distance -

We trace a line across the
night.

Trusting in the absence of
boundaries.

While the night curves to the
pleasure of our
fingers.

Trusting in return.

© Copyright 2005 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-05-23 07:41 PM


the only boundaries are the ones we create

another lovely piece from you Eric

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2005-05-23 08:33 PM


As I read this, I thought of mercury running in the bloodstream.  So very sensual, the images you draw with your mind.
TD

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3 posted 2005-05-23 09:38 PM


Softly sensual...beautiful!!!
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

suthern
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4 posted 2005-05-24 10:21 AM


We trace a line across the
night.

Trusting in the absence of
boundaries.

Oh... I love this! *S* And yes... distance is a lie... there can be miles between one side of the bed and the other... or a breath can cross a continent to whisper love... Beautiful!!

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with you
5 posted 2005-05-24 10:33 AM


every single poem...
*sigh*
wonderful

Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2005-05-24 11:38 AM


Fingers like rays of light

sent out on exploration

illuminating the night

hearts conducting the search

in playful orchestration.

They know the meeting point

where light meets light

on the magical screen

of this wondrous night.


*

Inspired by you, beautiful Masterpoet.
I love you.
Margherita

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2005-05-25 07:23 PM


Nice writing...James
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