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Beki
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0 posted 2005-05-23 04:43 AM


my shadow
swimming past you in a dream -
reach out
touch me with your heart,
give me substance again

[This message has been edited by Beki (05-23-2005 12:43 PM).]

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Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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1 posted 2005-05-23 05:06 AM


lovely Beki

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"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Beki
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since 1999-09-15
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Newport Beach, CA, USA
2 posted 2005-05-23 12:43 PM


thanks! sorry about the original typos  it was very late and I probably didn't even see them LOL
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2005-05-24 12:56 PM


NIce...James
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