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Equality Means Nothing To You
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Equality Means Nothing To You |
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SarBear Member
since 2003-06-05
Posts 205Massachusetts 
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What am I supposed to do... The memories don't stop coming But then again, The anger comes stronger I thought I knew who you were Now come to find, You stand against everything I have ever stood for You've always made me feel Lower than you Made me feel pitiful Doubt always crept into my mind around you Cause I was always looking down on myself The words that you said, sometimes weren't things friends would say You were oblivious to the pain I was invisibly feeling Though some would have picked up on it... You never did Now I'm looking back on all our friendliest days Seeing nothing right with this 2 plus 2 equation Because 2 and 2 are equal But when we are together I feel nothing like a two But much more like a 0 While you are far ahead Leading the way with a bright number 10 |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
people that need to put others down to make themselves feel superior, are just sad...you don't need anyone like that, and that certainly isn't the kind of friend you should have...  sorry you are hurting, I hope this realization of yours leads you to true friends... |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
it's good that you're looking back on this, and not still trying to look ahead through it. full of insight. i've got my BlackJack gum, my wild cherry pepsi, and i've got that feeling... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
as Ethan said, it's good to see this one as in the past |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like you are seeing things cleary and making a choice...a good choice...James |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Now I'm looking back on all our friendliest days Seeing nothing right with this 2 plus 2 equation Because 2 and 2 are equal But when we are together I feel nothing like a two But much more like a 0 While you are far ahead Leading the way with a bright number 10 the math sometimes.. doesn't add up... subtraction then can indeed make a positive from the negative.. clever..by the way..the bright 10... been a long time since I've seen your words.. nice to do so now.. though they indeed carry a sad message.. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
They aren't wearing a bright 10....you missed the negative sign before the number..  They are the one lacking. Stay away from them.Wonderfully written. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
its so refreshing to see a younger person, so full of wisdom and yet, care for herself, and her choices...the strength of this glows, as does your picture and words...happy that you have seen realistically what is, and not what is not there. Hugs to ya... |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
This was great !! I am sure that lots of people can relate to this write. Keep up the great work. Tima |
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