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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
I hand to you a rose of red, Birthed in loam of garden’s bed, Velvet petals on thorned stem, In pulchritude sits crimson gem. In your hands you cup red rose, Lifting bloom up to your nose, Inhaling deep of rose’s scent, Fragrant gift from nature sent. I see a smile upon your face As you inhale of rose’s grace, No greater beauties e’er shall I see, Than twin jewels, red rose and thee. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I tremor slightly in reading this very lovely poem of yours right NOW, immediately after inhaling the scent of a new red rose blooming on my balcony! That's synchronicity! You certainly have a romantic heart! Love, Margherita  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Flamboyent red... adding a blush to your love's cheek. Beautiful, Sir. Thank you. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
very nicely done - love the ending - sigh . . . S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is very romantic I love it |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As sweet as the flower portrays. Loved this. TD |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
BEAUTIFUL! ~ARH "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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