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Aisle Watch |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I'm waiting, seems I'm always waiting and wondering now, if the wait is worth it. The softest touch, where is it now? I watched him sleep and could not tell content, could not feel his thoughts, could not share his darkness. The distance grows, feelings begin to crumble, the beautiful begins to feel ugly as I sit in silence, watching someone else's future walking down the aisle. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a heartfelt piece I understand the feelings  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Wow - this one cuts deep - quite an ending- feeling this- SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Melancholic, but probably "healthy" ponderings, dear Maureen. So well done! Love, Margherita |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Pondering,profoundly ;perhaps? Well done! |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
I wish that I didn't understand this so well and feel it like I do now. {{{hugs}}} |
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VBallNut Member
since 2003-02-12
Posts 60Virginia, USA |
Oh, how I know this feeling well. I have been in the position where I've given up - only to have him realize what he was losing all too late. Well written. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I keep a small picture of my ex with her new husband in my hallway, with acceptance comes peace and understanding...James |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
M ...... Very nicely done. Very. Bob |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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