Open Poetry #35 |
Through Your Eyes |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Amber reflections of sunsets glow steadily sinking lower over the horizon where your dreams lie I see mirrored images through your eyes of hope floating upon waves of courage that come crashing down resulting the same strength is gained and the dreams of soul remain holding closely, sights unseen mystical moments in twilights gleam whispers of love on gentle breeze the unknown touch a silent tease simplistic innocence grasping keys of mysteries 'tis a magical life when the world is seen through your eyes... {thank you...through your eyes my pen sees....} I really want to care, I want to feel something, let me dig a little deeper nah, still nothing~ my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A pure delight to read, dear Donna! Love's eyes focus on beauty only. Just perfect. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
What lovley images this brings to my mind |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
BEAUTIFUL DONNA!!! ~Sending warm hugs your way lovely lady~ Life is one great big canvas; |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all very much. When we see the world through another poets eyes, we see so much more than what we see through our own sometimes. Poets are inspiring people yanno?? |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
ya said it so well - Hugs - S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: 'Atta girl... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
YEP! I agree. Great write. JL |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You penned this beautifully Bella. Thank you for allowing us to see through your eyes. Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanking each of you on this Friday morning and Maree, thank you for the inspiration of visions.... Hugs ya'll. I really want to care, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
you are a very special lady, poet and friend Donna.. you DO know that right? I'm sure i speak for many.... Bella Donna..beautiful lady. I thank you. Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
lovely this lovely you! luv ya I came from the mountain |
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