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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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I sit upon the broad shoulders of your mind twirling thoughts, between my fingers beading hope of forgotten focuses like rocks overlapping, prying open somewhat autonomous from other human capacities to free the sentry with heroin claws while you turn the ring on my finger days taking you somewhere else I mourned and wept to see your silence migrate to my consciousness hoping you’d hold sunlight why, this cold blue reality speaks only for itself? At night sitting deep in the mountains disappearing beneath a moment of discernment to which it bears witness what hasn’t changed? wearing what has changed around your neck damning the minutes for leaving are we drowning in some compromise? orbs far removed a question of time pinned to fabric of what passes and lingers? to the death of us consumed… like the moon swims in the sea the world before my eyes holds lots of arms I hear some seductive promise jolting bribing melting ice from slumber is it then, wings fly memories to your mind? echoing, “may i”? glued to the mirror of some mistaken heaven the God in my heart says let my feelings show shake them silly until May bleeds metaphors but, perhaps those are only my thoughts while sitting on the shoulders of God’s mind shaking them loose like apples from a tree magnetic words which should reach but fall from the lips of the wind my shadow creeps in passing between us, in silence youth with long hair, pure water in prayer turn clear and transparent drinking in the wonderful mood of loitering staring at beauty’s glance I climb the thoughts of wood & summer grasses gathering in mossy crevices moonlit evening returns every minute yet…this flow owes me nothing the auburn hair of the land, waves blond wearing a good life wearing my mind barefoot |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
may brings metaphors, yes !!!!!!!! loving that line and the hope and clarity that shines through in you here |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wow..you just overflow with thoughts that touch me in so many ways...I can't even begin to tell you.  and Good MorningM |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Fantastic lines here, dear Lee! You paint such awesome scenery. Love, Margherita  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ You are so incredibly word blessed! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Excellent write this morning sweety. Have a wonderful day.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just add me to the list of pleased readers...  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
LeeJ: In your heart lives a magical list of never ending verses from living and experiencing life. A good heart, a strong mind, and the veracity of a poet. You are blessed indeed, as is the reader. Pure enjoyment in this one. JL |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
love walking the surreal with you - LeeJ - and the mind thought places your words paint- Hugs - S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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