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Asylum |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Beyond these walls a buffer zone extends as far as I can see. Safe distance when the world is prone, and, strives to have its' way with me. It gives one comfort just to know asylum's always close at hand. Let problems work out as they may, not always as we would have planned. That's not to say, here in repose, such trials we will not have to face, just, windows open that were closed when given ample beathing space. Un-clouded and un-cluttered, rise, this fortresses' far reaching views, asylum, I would otherwise succumb, I feel as much is true. On days the air the wearied breathe contains such crystal clarity, the view atop asylums' walls converges on infinity. [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (05-18-2005 06:45 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Doc...I think I'd like a place like that, but I have a feeling that it's in your mind. Much enjoyed!  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
just, windows open that were closed when given ample beathing space. great lines~~ M |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Martie, But of course m'dear, and, as an added benefit, the taxes are really low! Thanks. Doc Nakd, Thanks. Sometimes, when "all about the Benjamins" seems way too intrusive, I like to have my little retreat. Glad you stopped by. Doc |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I know just what you mean Dr. That is why I am headed out to our trailer at the country campground. Peace....sigh hugs, ChrisPoetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This was a very good write! Very good!! |
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