When Water Rendezvouz With The Sky (Dark Angel inspired)

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2005-05-17 09:33 AM

There is a fullness about her today
dark and thick,
she cries to the skies

She is hungry

Her jelly like swells
break against the curves
of cliffs where she clings,

inspissating and pausing
before retreating into currents
that would hold you there

momentarily

while she laughs into the wind
before devouring you
into the depths
of her secrets held
deep beyond the surface

when water rendezvouz with the sky.

Maree? Thanks for the inspire
and I hope you don't mind
that it led my muse to write....

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (05-17-2005 11:08 AM).]

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2005-05-17 09:42 AM

My goodness! I also thank Maree's muse for inspiring your muse who is now inspiring my muse!

Love & Mother Moon's Light

Linda

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2005-05-17 10:47 AM

mmmmmm - love it -

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-05-17 01:58 PM

Lovely lovely write Donna.
Very much enjoyed...
Love ya lady~

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
-Danny Kaye

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-05-17 02:01 PM

Donna, this was incredibly beautiful!!!!

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2005-05-17 04:30 PM

well now this IS a most lovely treat to wake up to, wow Donna. Mind? oh heck no, i am honoured Donna, you write of her even more beautiful.

Thank you Bella, smiling big here.

adding to my library.

Mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2005-05-17 04:37 PM

As pretty as a postcard

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2005-05-18 08:05 AM

a lovely duo
for the rendevous
smooth and misty..........

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2005-05-18 08:32 AM

while she laughs into the wind
before devouring you
into the depths
of her secrets held
deep beyond the surface
nice... very nice indeed....

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2005-05-18 10:36 AM

ditto the lines Cpat quoted...

well done Donna!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2005-05-18 07:43 PM

how beautiful!

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

11 posted 2005-05-19 01:24 PM

my thanks to all of you.

Cpat, so good to see you again,
and I hope we are blessed with more of your words soon.

Maree, thank you bella for always inspiring.

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

12 posted 2005-05-19 05:37 PM

Had to read of her again, to see her through your eyes, and yanno? she's even more beautiful.

*smile*

Mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

13 posted 2005-05-20 09:02 AM

She is a lovely vision, of which I could see much more often....
sigh...
thanks Maree.

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