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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2005-05-17 02:50 AM

True to her heart
she laid it bare
for the world to see
herself and imperfections
in all her majesty
fluttering through waves
and tears of good bye
she is a free spirit
with an honest approach
her arms wide open
daring to fly
who will stand beside you
in her selfless way
sharing your happiness
letting love be
in spite of loves rejection
she does not question
her fate or well being
for she
is a faithful lover
and a lot like me
who remains in her misery
true to her heart.

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

1 posted 2005-05-17 03:54 AM

Beautiful. Sounds like someone I know. Good writing. martyjo

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

2 posted 2005-05-17 03:59 AM

sounds familar here too

very touching~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2005-05-17 07:21 AM

peeking in to see you are writing well~~~

missing you

love and hugs
M

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2005-05-17 07:35 AM

a snapshot in time
capture of soft sides
frozen in warm

enjoyed this lori

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2005-05-17 08:07 AM

a body's best friend

this spoke volumns, enjoyed both this sure fire poem and you...hugs

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2005-05-17 10:51 AM

the ending twisted me from one feeling into another - well done my friend -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2005-05-17 11:05 AM

Excellent write Bluesy gal...
Heart hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
-Danny Kaye

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2005-05-17 12:46 PM

Thank you~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2005-05-18 09:36 PM

a beautiful write

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

10 posted 2005-05-18 09:41 PM

Eloquently expressed.

believe in what your heart feels...

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

11 posted 2005-05-18 11:03 PM

WOW that was perfection m'lady and I can't help but say that it made me think of our ShadowyOne...

Tima

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

12 posted 2005-05-18 11:37 PM

she knows what she wants and wont accept anything less, a true blonde through and through

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

13 posted 2005-05-18 11:47 PM

Perhaps this be an empathetic, and appreciative, write for someone we all know and love?!?

With a heart as giving and loving as yours, you were able to write this poem with apparent caring and understanding, Beautiful Bluesy One...

Linda

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

14 posted 2005-05-19 12:44 PM

I don't know, I guess this is more for me and the one who stole my heart a long time ago, but I've seen it so many times. I'm not sure "misery" was the right choice of words, because in my sadness I've made peace with my blues. I'm just a little jaded, but I'll be ok, and I thank you all. You're really something, so very special to me!!!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

15 posted 2005-06-07 03:42 PM

Understand the Blues..I like the feel of this.
Sandra

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

16 posted 2005-06-07 11:21 PM

I haven't the words tonight, but thought I'd tell you how much I like this.  I like reading what you've written because you write so openly of feelings that many have had or are having.  You write so smoothly.
                hugs,

              miscellanea

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

17 posted 2005-06-08 12:21 PM

Nice...James

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

18 posted 2005-06-08 01:49 AM

"letting love be
in spite of loves rejection"

There must be a medal for this somewhere down the line of time.

Enjoyed this write, Bluesy gal.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

19 posted 2005-06-08 09:01 AM

very sweet, sad writing, and beautifully said.

Side bar~I emailed you a week or so ago but not sure if it was a good email address. I have a message for you from a friend....

so..email me?

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

20 posted 2005-06-08 02:24 PM

I'm glad this came back up... for I'd missed a great poem... you have a beautiful heart, lady. *S*

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