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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2005-05-16 10:30 AM

It's raining here today...
In my mind, I hear the ocean waves collide
and it soothes me
I settle into those thoughts
and remember what it feels like
to loose myself
while knowing
exactly who I am

there is comfort here
in those familiar sounds
that remind me
with eyes closed direction

I just have to hear your voice
and I know my way home

~SEA~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2005-05-16 10:40 AM

I just have to hear your voice
and I know my way home''''

~~**~~

exactly and what better way for a lead home....but a soft calling of voice....

I came from the mountain
The crust of creation
My whole situtaion-made from clay to stone

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-05-16 11:06 AM

Beautiful Susan..a very comforting feel to this lovely write.
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
-Danny Kaye

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-05-16 11:10 AM

you've shared the sight of knowing your best friend

I like it there to...(wink)

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2005-05-16 11:13 AM

Yes, and it is the softest voice that can lead the way home.

Happy home-coming!

EA

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2005-05-16 11:14 AM

Mmmmmm - simply lovely - as the ocean is-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2005-05-16 11:25 AM

Even the foggy mists
cannot hide the truths
of the heart...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2005-05-16 03:15 PM

and i shall make my home
where your voice is
where those mountains
touch the sky of you

where that ocean
is the woman of you
writhing my willing shore

a pleasure to read ms suesea

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

8 posted 2005-05-16 03:44 PM

Beautiful!!

Eric

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

9 posted 2005-05-16 05:30 PM

Beautiful Susan

Mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2005-05-16 05:48 PM

So beautifully peaceful, Susan...

Love this...

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2005-05-16 08:12 PM

enjoyed...James

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

12 posted 2005-05-16 08:42 PM

Very stirring words.

believe in what your heart feels...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

13 posted 2005-05-16 09:25 PM

Lovely write - lovely you.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

14 posted 2005-05-17 12:24 PM

thank you, each of you very very much.

and

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

15 posted 2005-05-17 03:17 AM

Your poetry always leaves a soft and soothing effect, SEAgal~

So pretty, you write~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

16 posted 2005-05-17 04:17 AM

God, Susan, I adore this:

and remember what it feels like
to loose myself
while knowing
exactly who I am

I need to GET BACK there.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

17 posted 2005-05-18 10:30 AM

I find comfort in the same kind of sounds.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

18 posted 2005-05-18 01:29 PM

I LOVE the last 2 lines to this poem. They made me think of Dave and smile. I will have to give him the biggest hug tonight when he gets home and blame it on you

Tara

"There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness." -Friedrich Nietzsche

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

19 posted 2005-05-18 07:46 PM

a lovely write....beautiful you

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

20 posted 2005-05-18 08:38 PM

lovely as always~~

M

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

21 posted 2005-05-19 12:26 PM

thank you guys so much for reading and your sweet replies!

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

22 posted 2005-06-11 03:11 AM

very nice write Sea
enjoyed
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

23 posted 2005-06-11 02:50 PM

it's the ocean waves colliding that is the voice that calls me home...

well done here SEA. you're lucky to get to feel this way.

we are what we seek

[This message has been edited by Ethan Halo (06-12-2005 03:03 PM).]

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

24 posted 2005-06-11 05:38 PM

Very precious moments shared beautifully!

Love,
Margherita

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