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Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-05-15 01:20 PM



shhhh-

listen –

the sky sighs his whisper words
feel me, know me, I am sky

hear the rustle of the leaves
their tree speak lingers
soft upon the soul

the flowers cry out in joy
in vibrant sounds colored red, pink, and yellow

even the rocks have their say
in stoic solidity
translating forever into spirit speech

shhhhh-

listen-

to the symphony of the earth
as her choir sings loud their names

it is the aria
of life

it is the World
alive


s.a.t.

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

© Copyright 2005 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2005-05-15 04:04 PM


Vivid and beautiful blossom here Susan.
Good to read you again.
TD

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2005-05-15 05:19 PM


thank you TD - most kind - and it's nice to be here

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2005-05-16 08:20 AM


a pleasure to look at what you grow
in your mind garden

let me bring my metal
and tattoo them for you

under your sigh skin

enjoyed it mrs

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2005-05-16 08:32 AM


Susan, you are one mighty fine poetessa! This rocks! Your spirit speech is divine! Truly enjoyed this stirring offering from your poetic soul! LOVELY!!!!!

Have a glorious day, Dear One!
Nature's Loving Light,
Linda

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2005-05-16 09:00 AM


And what a beautiful aria this is!!
Lovely lovely.
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
6 posted 2005-05-16 09:57 AM


Oh, my friends, you sigh me happy with your kindness - warm me with your hearts - thank you

Susan

D -

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279

7 posted 2005-05-16 07:31 PM


Brilliant. I love this. This is why I still come here to read.
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