Open Poetry #35 |
Dancing Inside Love's Embrace (Song Duet With CastleGuard) |
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
(My words are in red, his are in black)(After I had written my parts and posted in another song, CastleGuard emailed me with his words written, inspired, with mine...so I thought, to revise this with his words, for they are so beautiful and how they compliment mine.) "DANCING INSIDE LOVE'S EMBRACE" Oh My darling, Where can I find you, for I have been waiting, inside this dream, Inside this cherished dream I’ve been waiting for your song; There under stars’ silver beam Where you and I belong. Where the sun will rise, as the morning greets us, as I dance beside you, Within loves gleam, There we dance our midnight dance And steep our eyes in love; There our lips taste sweet romance Flown from the stars above. You are my forever, my life, this moment, we share our souls , never will I let go, Our bond cannot be broken, For it’s been forged in fire; No wrong words be spoken, Only words of souls’ desire. So breathe your love into me, take me in your arms, hold me till the moon disappears, I will hold you under moon’s lamplight; In my arms you’ll find calm peace- And when the moon dips from the sight Your heart will rest at ease. Cover me with, your arms of love, let the magic hold us here, together..... The magic of the starry night Is balm on aching heart; Close to me I hold you tight - Never wish to part. For I have been waiting, in this darkness of heart, In my world of lonliness, I am torn apart... To light your heart I wish to pray And to mend the rifts of past; In love’s embrace we’ll dance and sway And swim in lovers’ ocean vast. "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
You compliment each other very well..the words do indeed seam like the phantom of the opera duets...enjoyed reading this... Goldenrose. Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lovely... You du-et very well together! May we see an encore? Hugs to you both~Nancy Life is one great big canvas; |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Phil, Thanks for being so kind as to say that our song is like the Phantom of the opera songs and that we duet well together! ~ARh "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Nancy~ Thank You! yes we are preparing an encore as we speack..um.well type...LOL! Your compliment means alot to us, thanks for saying we duet well together! Hugs back to you! ~ARH "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a beautiful duet, lovely lacing of words back and forth |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
ARH and CG, your words make beautiful music together. I look forward to "hearing" more! Each of you is a very fine poet in your own right, but there is an extra touch of magic when your inks flow together. EA |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Awesome write from two great talents. Eric |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A lovely flow of words...James |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Thank you everyone for the kind comments - they're greatly appreciated. And thank you, ARH, for posting this... CG |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice! |
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