Open Poetry #35 |
Unless, It Were Courage |
babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Clockwork, these wet muscles tic over the marigold haunch of the March lyon, lying in atrophy over its golden thresholds of desolation, starved for a mandolin heart, in the overburdened artery of the patient body, as it burns an idol of red clay holds the momentary anatomy of my resonance, feverish under a writ, a commitment soaked in lamb's blood, bathes the soul's abundant rivers over the heart's redemptive brocade as it drinks its light solely from the heavy hands you offer to bind my wounds into your bones of red coal, swelling its serum between elbows and knees, wet and quivering these red, red tendons spread their delirium, rabid through the savage veins, you reign to guide me through the labyrinth of love's first, tremulous petals, held in your hands like a lambskin of prayer, and layered in the red, latent earth, your body fills mine with the deep, devastating hum of the river's song, and so becomes my sole dwelling. ...from the Fairytale Journals... 2005 copyright Mari laureano **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
"of my resonance, feverish under a writ, a commitment soaked in lamb's blood, bathes the soul's abundant rivers over the heart's redemptive brocade" Oh my! Now you know that is not fair to whet a whistle and run don't you? What a beautiful, beautiful portrait told this was. I can't say it enough Mari, the images you paint are in a league all their own. Simply exquisite work. Glad I was first on this, just sat down ~* Let's spend less time worrying when our life's going to end, and more on when it's going to start *~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thankyou for sharing My spirit will rise |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Mysteria~ You have always been a source of support and encouragement...thank you for that... and for the time you take to entertain my ramblings... Much Love, **Mari** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
MGROVES, the pleasure is truly, all mine~ love&light, **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
It's great to read you again babygirl, it's always a pleasure. maree "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
maree, thank you, my friend~ **Mari** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
shaking my head I cannot honestly say I understand this, but it does leave me feeling like, I have just spied upon some ancient ritual, in some dark catacomb that houses the graves of the holy orders. Are you contagious? *smile* I would hope so, and would be blessed for the inspiration. Enjoyed. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Serenity~ thank you, love.... so good to feel your presence~ love&light, **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
And I see your own spirituality showing... Like m'witch said, a ritual, a sacrifice |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
wranx~ thanks for looking...inward~ love&light, **Mari** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
She danced, alfight barefoot and naked beneath the silver scythe, pouring, screeching her life's blood running from her eyes, pouting from her lips, falling down her thighs - only to pool at her feet; baked like the sand - the dirt of day. And she danced, naked beneath the hot desert sun, and her sister moonchild. Each watching their creation, create. ------------------------------- I have missed you, Mari. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
your body fills mine with the deep, devastating hum of the river's song, and so becomes my sole dwelling. damn those lines rock lady... so good to see your words again I look forward to all of your offerings on these pages of blue. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
your pieces are perfectly packaged into candy D |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
littlewing~ my sister, thank you~ ~~~~~~~~~ GentleSpirit~ your kind words are deeply felt.. ~~~~~~~~~ dark~ thanks, love... love&light, **Mari** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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