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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Style exudes each chapter of you Rambling around my vacant rooms A sensuality unmatched worn to dangle It seems that what is left entices dreams Part memory and part prophecy All through me are the threads Places I have let you enter unchallenged As I have traveled all around your heart So too, have you traveled mine Parted in the gentle glee of consideration Elegance and eminence seem twin crowns You wear so very well Yet as I search along the in-seams of before What I find are tender spots, both mine and yours Ghostly ships find peaceful shores Loosening the starch of reflex and repress Forging altruistic goals, in glowing hopeful coals The messages that feed my mind escape in moan Exploring you, a wilderness That I see through To where my heart resides As best intentions visualize Sweet dreams caress In every beat but mine unless The rain enlightens summer dress Copyright Kkh 05/31/05 |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is wonderful. I really enjoyed the read. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh, but you do weave a poem so very well. Such a joy to read. Good morning Kiddo. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Love your transparency, as it unfolds in your beautiful words! Your poetic performance is a joy to read. Love, Margherita  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ 'Yet as I search along the in-seams of before What I find are tender spots, both mine and yours' What beautiful poetic strokes to the memories held in the heart~  You are my joy to read~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
WoW! You do weave a poem so very well! |
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Aleta Member
since 2005-04-17
Posts 102Louisiana |
As if a sheer, chiffon fabric, this poem glides and moves with the soul, lending beautifully to flowing words and draped sighs of delight. Enjoyed this write. |
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