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"Picture This"
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"Picture This" |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Were there only a way to convey passing clouds, to display transcience with the stroke of a pen. Such a feat, would at once, make both humble and proud those who've sought that connection again, and again. There's an infinite blue that remains non-descript, and a depth to the shadows beyond what lay here. Such in-adequate clues form a scene that's been stripped to a black and white image again, for, I fear, there may be such a way though it's not been revealed. To transcend from this plane and the sum of its' parts, and to simply describe what has long been concealed, with such effort-less grace it could only be art. Elements of a scene, composition and light, yet the focus, somehow, still does not seem quite right. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Doc? From your lips... to the poets' pens... Amen! And I loved the rhyme, the scheme, the everything of your talent! TEACH ME! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
there may be such a way though it's not been revealed. To transcend from this plane and the sum of its' parts, and to simply describe what has long been concealed, with such effort-less grace it could only be art. Your words ARE art Dr. Very well done sir! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile... me likes the edges blurred anyhow. Much more nicer than life that way.  It's great to read you, Doc. You are my personal Rx. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sunshine, Thank you, what a great compliment, and, though I doubt it is true, I would be more than happy to share this modicum of knowledge of the poetic arts. However, please bear in mind, you probably know more than I do already. Doc Gentle Spirit, How very kind of you to say. Thank you. Serenity, Ah, and so good to hear from you, you never cease to amaze. Hopefully, I'll be around a little more often now, Thanks as always, Doc |
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