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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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I left my body to dream of white mornings returning again Glow phantoms of summit bonfires Beneath a moon ending by late fall And I want to hear the sound between Our minds… When ocean seaweed Tickled & teased our feet As you held me during impending Ricochets… Handing me one of your chic ribs You, feathered pillow Buddha...you! I’m sorry you found my Achilles' heel Ocean’s blue eyes smelled like a bruised apple Life’s ruin is the tears which never attend school I’m afraid of heights Constant hope, kept my 35 mm Kodak busy Those darned moody lenses! Without inner or outer limits Introduced me to once upon a time Enormous deafening voids Memories of summer, a soldier of a man Butcha know, Sometimes a gal just needs to be? I stood in line at the church 3 times Down on my hands & knees in prayer Just in case my sense of direction was blinded By city lights and need I’m afraid of heights Afraid of failing my real estate exam….again! You said I was afraid to feel You’re wrong! I’m terrified of the bruises, caused “from” feeling I’ve not known any fruit of promise Just constant reminders of boys who love 38 D Disney Worlds The autumn wind picks me up, taking me to Places I’ve never been, like you used to do …and the real me, is Not afraid of falling… I’m afraid of people who’ve had plastic surgery What lies beneath me, is a handful With no desire to be polished! This “is” as good as it gets I’ve become accustomed to rice checks for dinner Eventide becomes my best friend Can’t seem to look past today Besides, the bruises on my wrists from the chains Are just starting to heal, while migrating With Canadian geese….taking longer breaths They let me lead sometimes Do you have any idea, how good that feels Coming in for that once in a lifetime landing? Though, I still dry my hair in that comfort chair You gave me...and feel every lifetime Sometimes higher then climbable But heck, you fall off a horse, you get back on Right? Funny, though, how a person never gives up That good man in my life dream... Ahhh huh, you, were, for me, him...surprised? Don't be, don't be sad.... The Facets of We looked promising... Like the song goes 2 outa 3 ain't bad! Yes, Love still looks back, then faces forward Faces the wind…reading tea leaves I smile at that old gal in the mirror And a low moon rhyme Sometimes, I enjoy, dreaming December With just my sensei Beneath that ol’ willow tree Still loving you Still realizing the purpose for our meeting It was in those danged celestial cards That father time, dealt to meaning Knowing "us" in another lifetime "another cup of tea, perhaps?" [This message has been edited by LeeJ (05-10-2005 11:38 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Good morning sweety you brewed a fine cup of tea this morning. |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
enjoyed the read this morning bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
LeeJ, You are the depth of promise. Such an amazing soul flows the lingering thoughts of your heart. Loved this. TD |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes a gal just needs to be... ~*~ I'll cuppa your tea and add scones... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Butcha know, Sometimes a gal just needs to be? I stood in line at the church 3 times Down on my hands & knees in prayer Just in case my sense of direction was blinded By city lights and need --------------------------------------- Wow lady, this just grabbed me.... just in case indeed!!! Loved this Lee, truly loved this.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lee, I feel honoured to read your poetry for it is always rich in colour and meaning ~ and you. I enjoyed the pace of this poem. I was able to absorb it all as I read along. You are are a beautiful poetess ~ within and without.  Hugs with much affection, Linda |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Your words always lead on an amazing journey. Eric |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Enjoyed this immensely - SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ "I’m afraid of heights Afraid of failing my real estate exam….again! You said I was afraid to feel You’re wrong! I’m terrified of the bruises, caused “from” feeling" You are not afraid of searching inside for the words to tell it like it is....I admire you a great deal, ya know?  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Yes, Love still looks back, then faces forward Faces the wind…reading tea leaves I smile at that old gal in the mirror And a low moon rhyme Sometimes, I enjoy, dreaming December With just my sensei Beneath that ol’ willow tree Still loving you Still realizing the purpose for our meeting It was in those danged celestial cards That father time, dealt to meaning Knowing "us" in another lifetime "another cup of tea, perhaps?" Dang lady you sure do know how to write!! This is a fantastic read Lee..and it's going into my library. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Life is one great big canvas; |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Good grief! I would have to list out the entire poem to cover all the brilliant lines you have here. You have an amazing talent to say things in a very unique way and make the reader know exactly what you are saying and feeling...I salute your ability, miss...from a man who chased 38 D disneyworlds. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
LeeJ As usual, a powerful arrangement of plain phrases enhanced by hints of sarcasim and strong metaphor.....dang, I love your style! -----------ice/ford ><> |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
many many thanks to all of you for stopping by and reading...and to boot, your generous comments... Sy, always happy to brew and serve...sugar? Bernie, thanks for your eyes TD...and you are a poet whom I love to read Sunshine...Scones you say, heck, I'll be right over GS...Thanks always for your gracious heart That invite to Musikfest is always open...your more then welcome! Earth Angel...You overwelm me with such a generous comment...believe me, words cannot descirbe what PIP has done for me, not to mention, such endearing poets Ericc, it's always a pleasure to take you there...especailly upon reading you...your a gentle man. Susan...thanks a bunch...lets walk the surreal together sometime...so enjoy your poetry Martie, Martie, Martie...and you gal, are indeed a great venture...your mind Rocks! Enchantress...I'm taking your kind comment and saying the same to you...love your work...a pleasure always to read you. Oh, by the way...Somewhere in Time was a fav, as well. Deer...heheheh, your a hoot, and you should talk about brillant lines...chase away!!!! Ice...from one fella PA resident to another, thanks so much for reading...geeze, I don't ever want to come across as sarcastic? I'd like to think perhaps a bit of humor sometime, I think God loves a nice smile now and then? Yes? |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Are just starting to heal, while migrating With Canadian geese….taking longer breaths They let me lead sometimes Do you have any idea, how good that feels Coming in for that once in a lifetime landing? i like that they do; they know you will bring them in safely nice cup of tea this morning, yes...... |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Ah yes...the journey you take us on opens in visions of sharing and understanding...Words that draw the reader in to see each scene as it plays out before our eyes...I loved reading every word...**hugs** |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
inky...your way to kind, but someone at work said to me once..."oh, your such a mom!"...I liked that, and being a wife, as well.. thanks hun Startime, thanks a bunch for your heart and mind...hugs backatcha |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
More than memories reviewed, it’s a living re-lived. This is one of your best, Lee J. Had me reading each verse over and over again… Enjoyed. JL |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked this one alot... You ended it well. It was a good read. _juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Lee ... a wonderful write and I enjoyed it very much. I can't email you either. Not sure why.  Hmmmm...how are we going to remedy this? hugs, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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