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PazSqual Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 71 |
Side by side through good time and bad Through the devastation of a storm The recovery of the flood that followed To the mix of Blue and Grey days That lay ahead Without question or demand A helping hand extended out Though it didn’t bring happiness It was there to guide the way Now that the skies are looking blue The sunshine here to stay The wingless shadow sets adrift So that the grey days stay away |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
A vision of beauty brought to life after the dark, fearful devastation of a storm....a vision the reader can feel...well done... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This write described the feeling as the weather clears after a storm...so too, does the soul...given time and care. Liked the positive vibes. As I apply the topical, to my own life...I would offer that the greatest happiness given and received is without question, and does not require...it always was, it is and it will be. Oh (she blushes), did you mean by the title that you didn't want any RSVP? Some poems just reach into the heart and bring the responses on their own merrit. Nice One Paz. TD |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
My response to Bubba: Bump |
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