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bslicker
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state of mind

0 posted 2005-05-09 11:05 AM


mind paths

as the winged Angel
swooped down
from the heaven’s
aiding choices
in the mind paths
once taken.


bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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1 posted 2005-05-09 11:07 AM


Yes Bernie, thank God for those Angels that ease our minds.  Nicely penned sir.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

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2 posted 2005-05-09 11:09 AM


Thank Godness for those Heaven-sent angels that come swooping down when we most need them! They saved me many a time and steered me in the right direction!


Linda

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3 posted 2005-05-09 11:42 AM


Ah yes....a vision that heals the soul...well done...

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just out of reach
4 posted 2005-05-09 01:19 PM


Wonderful write Bernie! Hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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5 posted 2005-05-09 04:36 PM


I wish those angels would visit me sometime, and if they do I hope I recognize them.

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6 posted 2005-05-09 05:09 PM


nicely written, Bernie

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7 posted 2005-05-10 08:23 AM


Thank you all for reading again,
just thought this was fitting for mother's day,
for without being born,
there would be no mothers,
yikes!
nor me or you.

bernie
  

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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