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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2005-05-09 06:55 AM




Obviously This Point In Time

Obviously this point in time
You found nothing to say
So all I can ever hope for
Is that you reply some day

Perhaps some point in time
You might become aware
Although you say nothing
I had written to show I care

Perhaps some point in time
You could shed new light
All I could ever ask of you
Is you find the time to write

Obviously this point in time
You had not kept in touch
So to a silent friend I write
I have missed you so much

Obviously this point in time
You have no time to spare
So if I ever enter your mind
Loving words I long to share


HopeĀ©2005

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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2005-05-09 07:33 AM


HopeS
"Obviously" Well done, enjoyed.

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2005-05-09 11:52 AM


Oh yes...your words touch the heart and make one wonder do we write to those we care about enough....Very well said, Hope...**big hugs**

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-05-09 11:55 AM


Hope, hello, how are you?  
this was streaching the heart...leaving it open for any senerio...which makes the mind start wondering?

Lovely and well done...

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