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Visiting There
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I visited there today... All morning I could here her distantly, my once mountain home was calling me come, sit awhile in the sun ease your troubled mind listen to my wisdom whispers the answers you might find I visited there today... as I sat in the warmth listening to her song reveling in the peaceful calm a breeze of spring blew tree tops 'round and echoes of life made such a beautiful sound the sun darted in and out of the trees while shadows played in dance of leaves. I visited there today... and I thought of you, and you... the mother we never had and the only mother that we knew... Happy Mothers day Dad, we will always love you... I really want to care, I want to feel something, let me dig a little deeper nah, still nothing~ my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How beautifully sensitive, dear Donna. Indeed there are Fathers who also have the role of a Mother (or the other way around, as was my case). Enjoyed your write greatly. Love, Margherita |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
My mom let me go live with my dad when I was 13 and then she and I lost touch, so I kinna know what you are talking about. He was my MOM for a long while before she and I had a relationship again. Bless you and your daddy!! Tima |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle, Well done and thank you for posting. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
know this if your a mom happy moms day My spirit will rise |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Understanding hugs coming your way. Happy Mother's Day sweet lady. New pic? Pretty!!!  Life is one great big canvas; |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks all I hope mothers day was good to all the mothers out there. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Bella, this really touched, such beautiful longing. I felt the warmth of the sun, the way it darted through the trees, to welcome and kiss you.  P.S Lerrve the pic  Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" Michael Hutchence (INXS) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You are as beautiful as your words... Loveya! Linda |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
He knows, my friend, even without this...but this is a beautiful tribute. jwesley |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My sweet friends, thank you so much. Even life, when it has been touched by sadness can be special when you had someone like my dad around..being mom and dad. Hugs, to all with my sincerest thanks. [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (05-10-2005 08:42 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestSpirit~ oh ... softly spoken ... such a gentle token~ Lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thank you so much sweet Lady...  |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
beatiful...I lived the opposite, my mom was both...haven't talked to my father in 25 or more years.......sigh...but I have never been able to make that sound as eloquent and loving as you have with this |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
JB Hugs you....and thank you for stopping in and sharing a moment with me. |
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