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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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Let me breath into you As you breath into me Drown in forever Choke on those fantasies Facing heaven or hell stood inbetween Waging war on ourselfs Rousing demons within Teasing these senses, with changes Will you give into me! Whisper a pray to the outerworld The devil will laugh As god cries the blissing Alone seems better than Believing in either of these! These walls caving into The changes of life Safety seems further away Let this demon be me! Open your arms to the believer The only faith is self If fault is shown blame yourself Not the ones that never listen Heaven or hell stood inbetween Wiser than anybody Bowing on there knees Let this demon be me! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Aw, yer too sweet of a guy to be a demon!   EA |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write!  ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
You sneaky little devil~LOL! I agree with Earth Angel, underneath is a heart that drips with sweetness~  ~ARH We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the first two lines threw me until I realized you meant "breathe" instead of "breath" then it flowed nicely |
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