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klm
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since 2004-09-07
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New Orleans, Atlanta

0 posted 2005-05-06 04:43 PM


He was crying          
when I saw him--    
his little legs
                            dangling      
over the edge of the bench,          
his little hands wiping          
away the precious tears.          
"What's wrong sweet child?"
I softly asked him.          
His tear-drenched ruby lips replied,        
"I left my teddy bear in the court house,        
and when mommy went to get him, he was gone.          
You think baby Jesus will love him too?"          
When I realized what he meant
I dabbed my own tears and said,
"Yes, and He'll hug him just like this."
With his little shoulder nudging toward his ear he asked,      
"You think He'll hug my daddy too?"
As pain swirled through my heart I said,
"Yes, just like you hugged me."            


We talked until he heard her call.

The true poet writes to express, not impress.

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Lane - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-05-06 07:02 PM


oh wow
I'm speechless here

wonderful, heartfelt, touching write

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