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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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time was a funny bone under the elbow of the mind how did it get poked on something so soft as a thought when you dealt the cards to yourself with aces a cheating hand pro but it wasn't cheating if it tasted that good once more with feeling or without if you can just cause it is better than the traditional fan blade rhythm of how you always used to before you found electric under the switch in the forest that momma never used when she made the promises that watered her eyes more than onions so say the pray words and tell the plaster priests you didn't really want to know me _______________ dark |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good one |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
when she made the promises that watered her eyes ~*~ I'd say... you've been reading something of serenity...  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I like how you pay attention to details when you're setting the mood. Nice shuffle of words, DS~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
your minds eye steps onto another plain, aware and most aptly described by your muse, and heart. Amazing |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
"when she made the promises that watered her eyes more than onions so say the pray words and tell the plaster priests you didn't really want to know me " excellent! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
deep~ My spirit will rise |
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