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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2005-05-05 09:39 PM

It was three....softly spoken, felt in
a shiver of skin that ached to be lightly
rubbed...Three syllables bound together,
clinging to a heart that swore for them
before a God who knew, could taste
that which was...

Each so cherished, so hungered for,
so deeply implanted in a soul....to be
never expelled or cast away...until
anger leaves a scar upon the palms
that once clasped in a Sunday stroll,
or a lingering swing as vines reached
out....attempting to clutch...Oh, the
sweet smell of Honeysuckle....

Yes, three....standing there beyond a
sun’s rise...a moon's lingering fall, a
warm but gentle sea breeze on an
Autumn day....three words...

From my heart to you.....

I love you

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2005-05-05 09:53 PM

Oh, how beautiful is this?!!
Library bound it is. Thankyou dear Magnus.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

2 posted 2005-05-05 09:53 PM

Damn....I love you, too, Magnus!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2005-05-05 10:55 PM

So much expression that a few words could not due justice. One of your very finest writes Mag.

Rolling my eyes at Balladeer...
Excellent
TD

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2005-05-06 01:03 AM

Love is a shiver and an ache alright,
and there lies the rub!

You write it so nice, Barry~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-05-06 07:49 PM

LOL @ Deer

this is a beauty Barry

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2005-05-07 01:03 PM

a rare beauty ~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

7 posted 2005-05-07 01:09 PM

Oh my gosh...A stunning poem that flows deep into the heart....words that, knowing you, carries feelings that can only be express in words that flow from the caress of your heart...Magnificent writing, my friend...*hugs*

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2005-05-07 06:12 PM

LOL@'Deer's reply.
This is beautiful Barry...
Thank you so much for the note.

~Big hugs coming your way, Nance~

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
-Danny Kaye

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

9 posted 2005-05-07 07:22 PM

hoh sweat

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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