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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2005-05-05 06:47 PM

Starlight shimmered the silent pool at water’s
edge, shimmering into sparkling eyes and
gave hint of a smile that only he knew well.

A softened hand lightly caressed the pool’s
edge, sending tiny ripples lazily toward a
distant shore...where he awaited her, where
her dreams lay in ache of her need.

He sang to her, his belle....anf listened quietly
for the sigh...one that would tell him more
than a touch might ever convey....

Listen,
my love, hear the heart’s beat beyond the
shadows....come, for I am nigh...my lips
await thy own...

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2005-05-05 06:59 PM

Magical, dear Barry!

A scene that makes me want to watch a romantic movie ... immersing in love.

Love, Margherita

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

2 posted 2005-05-05 07:57 PM

Nicely romantic, Magnus. A gentle sort of thing.

Core

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2005-05-05 11:26 PM

Barry...I like the idea of ripples sending a love note....yep, I do!!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2005-05-05 11:43 PM

Barry, I would stand in line forever and a day to buy a book of your love poems!

Oh, you are reeeallly goood!

Linda

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

5 posted 2005-05-06 12:00 PM

sigh swoon this is FANTASTIC! I have to find more of your stuff to read! I remember reading them a long way back but this is awesome!

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

6 posted 2005-05-06 02:52 PM

Wow Barry...! My favorite of all of
your great writes!

Eric

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2005-05-06 07:13 PM

mmmmmm

wow

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

8 posted 2005-05-06 07:16 PM

Wow! This is very nice.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2005-05-06 07:43 PM

Bzrry,
Well you sure got the ladies attention with this one.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2005-05-07 12:08 PM

Enjoyed...James

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