Open Poetry #35 |
Fingers Ploy |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Starlight shimmered the silent pool at water’s edge, shimmering into sparkling eyes and gave hint of a smile that only he knew well. A softened hand lightly caressed the pool’s edge, sending tiny ripples lazily toward a distant shore...where he awaited her, where her dreams lay in ache of her need. He sang to her, his belle....anf listened quietly for the sigh...one that would tell him more than a touch might ever convey.... Listen, my love, hear the heart’s beat beyond the shadows....come, for I am nigh...my lips await thy own... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Magical, dear Barry! A scene that makes me want to watch a romantic movie ... immersing in love. Love, Margherita |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Nicely romantic, Magnus. A gentle sort of thing. Core |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry...I like the idea of ripples sending a love note....yep, I do!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Barry, I would stand in line forever and a day to buy a book of your love poems! Oh, you are reeeallly goood! Linda |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
sigh swoon this is FANTASTIC! I have to find more of your stuff to read! I remember reading them a long way back but this is awesome! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow Barry...! My favorite of all of your great writes! Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
mmmmmm wow |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow! This is very nice. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bzrry, Well you sure got the ladies attention with this one. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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