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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2005-05-05 09:40 AM





~The sky in Rictameter form ... softly spoken~



~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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kayjay
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1 posted 2005-05-05 09:44 AM


As cloudy is often a state of mind, yours can certainly have no clouds in it.  But clouds are a way of life in Oregon.
Nicely written in one of my favorite forms.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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2 posted 2005-05-05 10:11 AM


So softly lovely Marge.  It's amazing what can be seen in the beauty of clouds. Hugs.
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3 posted 2005-05-05 10:37 AM


A right-fine rictameter! This beautiful posted lifted me up, up, and away into the divine blue yonder!

Love & Sky Light,
EO

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4 posted 2005-05-05 11:42 AM


Marge  
As always a delight to read.

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5 posted 2005-05-05 12:19 PM


oh, this does make me want to dance!
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6 posted 2005-05-05 12:25 PM


Now where is my chiffon dress?

Beautiful Marge.

hugs, Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

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7 posted 2005-05-05 12:32 PM


  "Silence in drift so as to not awaken the landscape!"   It's the perfect word choice to take me away from my desk at lunchtime to a skyday outdoors.  I can imagine the sheep and dragons floating by.  Thanks for the lift, Marge!

          miscellanea

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8 posted 2005-05-05 05:02 PM


Dear Marge:  A beautiful poem and picture, as usual!  I love the clouds at this time of year and can see yours are just as lovely.

Love
Betty Lou

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9 posted 2005-05-05 07:24 PM


Dear Marge, I could lay for hours in the grass watching the clouds. And cumulus are truly an incredible source of inspiration!

Wonderful combination of your talents!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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10 posted 2005-05-06 01:44 AM


Wonderful picture and words, Marge!   XOXOXOXOXOX
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