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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-05-05 04:19 AM



Round, perfection,
no beginning, no end,
came to be,

Eternity, infinity,
a plan, destiny,
unity,

Continuous lifes'
crossing paths,
throughout years,

Chance meetings,
led by fate,
two lives, same path,

Now I stand,
gazing at you,
where it all began,

In the center,
our universe,
love without end,

Complete_Full Circle.

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

© Copyright 2005 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
adagio
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since 2005-03-19
Posts 449
Marrero, La.
1 posted 2005-05-05 04:56 PM


Very well done, very much enjoyed reading this one.

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2005-05-06 06:02 AM


Thanks adagio, this was written for a girlfriend of mine, she needed a poem for her wedding.

~ARH

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-05-06 11:47 AM


a very pretty concept


Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

4 posted 2005-05-06 02:53 PM


Perfect.

Eric

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2005-05-06 03:04 PM


Thanks Lee for your kind reply!

~Love and hugs
~ARH

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2005-05-06 03:05 PM


Eric...that was sweet..thank you!

~ARh

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
7 posted 2005-05-06 07:10 PM


lovely write...just beautiful
Jonathan
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since 2005-05-04
Posts 11
Paris
8 posted 2005-05-09 09:10 AM



Spiralling around
between beginning and end,
searching common ground,

where community
writes its own eternity,
discovers unity,

Years lose sense of sense
weaving synchronicity
to pattern intense

Where "Chance" meets with fate
Cause/Effect interrelate
paths anticipate.

Now who is standing,
paraphrasing who, and who
just understanding,

No full circle where
no end and no beginning
a new start prepare

Life : A finite succession of infinite opportunities

Poetry : Open sharing of individual ability to channel creative soul-song AWAY from the ego

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
9 posted 2005-05-10 02:19 AM


WOW...Jonathan...What a surprise!

Thanks for that brilliant piece of poetry!

~ARH

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
10 posted 2005-05-10 02:22 AM


Dixie,

I see you have replied, thanks..i didn't want to forget you....

~ARH

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
11 posted 2005-05-10 02:41 PM


lovely -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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