Open Poetry #35 |
Full Circle |
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Round, perfection, no beginning, no end, came to be, Eternity, infinity, a plan, destiny, unity, Continuous lifes' crossing paths, throughout years, Chance meetings, led by fate, two lives, same path, Now I stand, gazing at you, where it all began, In the center, our universe, love without end, Complete_Full Circle. "Let me not to the marriage of true minds |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Very well done, very much enjoyed reading this one. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks adagio, this was written for a girlfriend of mine, she needed a poem for her wedding. ~ARH "Let me not to the marriage of true minds |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a very pretty concept |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Perfect. Eric |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks Lee for your kind reply! ~Love and hugs ~ARH "Let me not to the marriage of true minds |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Eric...that was sweet..thank you! ~ARh "Let me not to the marriage of true minds |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely write...just beautiful |
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Jonathan Junior Member
since 2005-05-04
Posts 11Paris |
Spiralling around between beginning and end, searching common ground, where community writes its own eternity, discovers unity, Years lose sense of sense weaving synchronicity to pattern intense Where "Chance" meets with fate Cause/Effect interrelate paths anticipate. Now who is standing, paraphrasing who, and who just understanding, No full circle where no end and no beginning a new start prepare Life : A finite succession of infinite opportunities |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
WOW...Jonathan...What a surprise! Thanks for that brilliant piece of poetry! ~ARH "Let me not to the marriage of true minds |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Dixie, I see you have replied, thanks..i didn't want to forget you.... ~ARH "Let me not to the marriage of true minds |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
lovely - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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