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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-05-04 07:08 PM



The Mood In Me

Through the window,
the shades of purple
bleed new life into me,
unchaining the melody of thoughts
that invade my aftersleep,
filling the emptiness
that lays beside me.

There is a missing here
that waits, impatient for tomorrow,
fearing walls built by time,
wanting to be lifted
to where the earth meets the sky
and the blending of the evening
reminds me of those Lilacs,
there ... below my window.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
1 posted 2005-05-04 07:14 PM


I bet those lilacs are beautiful.
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2005-05-04 08:01 PM


There is a missing here
that waits, impatient for tomorrow,
fearing walls built by time,
wanting to be lifted
to where the earth meets the sky

Love that, and all of this~
Solitude is no stranger to me, who would have ever thought
I would actually get comfortable with it.

Many hugs to you,  Maur~

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2005-05-05 05:12 AM



Goldenrose
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4 posted 2005-05-05 06:21 AM


A poem of colour and life...thank you M..

Goldenrose.

Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt)

adagio
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since 2005-03-19
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Marrero, La.
5 posted 2005-05-05 06:01 PM


M. very well done!

DavePage
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6 posted 2005-05-05 06:19 PM


I would't venture to comment

Good words

Dave

ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2005-05-05 11:09 PM


So delicate, these thoughts that bloom in aftersleep. Wonderful piece Maureen.
TD

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