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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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when the buffalo went north I sprinkled my rhema there in the meadow of shallow woman I gathered nettles in the tall grass of her moaning confusion and braided them at my loins my arrows laugh now at this dawn they are but buttons protruding from the soft flesh of logos their agape is small river deep with shimmer stone music that calls to the eagles there are no days left on my wrist only the warm nights by the fires of a stranger but I know the scent of her tegument _____________ dark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
WOW babe, this is simply outfrigginstanding! Loved your visions this morning.  I really want to care, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I bet she's smiling right now, while silently thinking "Busted"! Tremendous write, me thinks we're on a similar page this morn...  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
love the soft side mmmmmmmmmm after bedding down on the prickly nettles makes it all the more appealing you do work magic |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
their agape is small river deep with shimmer stone music that calls to the eagles there are no days left on my wrist only the warm nights by the fires of a stranger ~*~ Now how did you know I heard the Indians chanting on this cool May morning... this was perfect for my moody muse! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
gs, thanks babe for the eyes and grins __________ Lee J, you are a treat lady, thank you for the waltz music _____________ ms inky, will always save a slow dance for the bad girl in your ballgown, thanks lady _________ ms sunshine, whisper to the spirits for me give them your smile words, thanks lady friend |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
stunning - so many ways to see this - but as always - you weave magic with your words -  SIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
susan, thanks babe |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
awesome~ My spirit will rise |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Groves, thanks for the review lady!! |
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