Suzie Wong (Might be wrong)

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Open Poetry #35

Suzie Wong (Might be wrong)

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-05-04 12:45 PM

Suzie Wong (Might be wrong)

Not a pleasant thought,
I'm just trying to find
the place where I belong.
Thoughts are creeping in,
Suzie Wong might be wrong.

I think she has a boyfriend,
I thought that was me,
I told her to choose
what's important to her,
and apparently she's
choosing me.

Not a pleasant thought,
I'm just trying to find
the place where I belong.
Bad thoughts quit creeping in,
Suzie Wong couldn't be wrong.

JamesLee
May03
2005
I wrote this several months
ago when I was doubtful about
me and Suzie, I'm more
confident now.
She better not be wrong.

timothysangel1973

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since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

1 posted 2005-05-04 02:03 AM

I liked this James.. and yes I do hope that she isn't wrong as well m'friend

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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2 posted 2005-05-04 03:36 AM

with you, she couldn't be wrong

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2005-05-04 07:26 PM

Thank you Timothy and passing shadows...as I said these are thoughts from long ago, or early in the relationship...I tend to have lots of doubts without a constant barrage of assurance...and she's doing a pretty good job of convincing me...indeed I hope that she is never wrong...James

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

4 posted 2005-05-05 10:34 AM

I like this, and I too hope that she isn't wrong. Well written!

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