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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-05-03 10:11 AM


Distant are the sounds
in these empty spaces
that were once filled
with the songs
of our souls


   mere echoes now
         of what was



I tilt my head,
listen through the stillness
to find just one strain;
one note
still afloat

in hollowed caverns.

It is silent now.

Love's symphony once played there


in melody so pure
every chord
was beautifully orchestrated

a perfect harmony
of two hearts joined
in passionate rhapsody.

A lullaby
so moving
it would bring me
to tears

  and still I cry
       after all of these years


for a song, now faded
from memory

with a prayer
for one more dance

between you and me.




I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-05-03 10:15 AM


"  and still I cry
       after all of these years

for a song, now faded
from memory

with a prayer
for one more dance

between you and me."

Beautiful Donna...so gently spoken.
Love ya lady~

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2005-05-03 10:27 AM


I tilt my head,
listen through the stillness
to find just one strain;
one note
still afloat

~*~

I do that, too...just that way...


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2005-05-03 01:30 PM


understanding this

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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
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In Your Poetic Mind
4 posted 2005-05-03 05:16 PM


and still I cry
       after all of these years

for a song, now faded
from memory

with a prayer
for one more dance

between you and me.

~~


dance and let your heart be free....luv you sister of my heart....

I don’t mind spending everyday
Out on your corner in the pouring rain
Look for the girl with the broken smile
Ask her if she wants to stay awhile

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

5 posted 2005-05-04 09:02 AM


hugging you all and thanking you...
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