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2 Jan. pieces |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
In Distinctive Hues silver paints the winter sky a jeweled chill sparkling diamonds tinting lakes in its likeness a mirror of cool, iciness and I watch from a warmth of brown cozy as a grizzly or a joey at naptime~ a touch of mocha coating me the contrast is breathtaking the brisk chill of silver the fuzzy warmth of brown home amid the season’s chill sheltered that I may enjoy its beauty ©January 7, 2005 Winter’s Savor coarse sea salt appears to dress each surface crystalline stars, lacy diamonds cling to the chill of this morning extremely fine “sodium chloride” seems to be seasoning our world giving it a cool, crisp flavor easy to appreciate this side of the glass ©January 8, 2004 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A painter's brush could not do justice to the imagery that was given to me as I read both of these... Salt, makes me think of a Marguerita... ummmmm...so good! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the sky shaking silver the picture painted nice touch of you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice ones |
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